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一、根据意思和作用的不同,过渡词可以分为以下十五类: (1)表并列关系的过渡词: and, also, as well, as well as, or, too, not only…but also, both … and, either … or, neither…nor (2)表递进关系的过渡词: besides, in addition(加之,除……之外), moreover(此外,而且), what’s more, what’s worse (3)表转折对比的过渡词: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first… whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand…on the other hand, some…others (4)表原因的过渡词: because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to(由于) (5)表结果的过渡词: so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, so…that, such…that (6)表条件的过渡词: if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as (7)表时间的过渡词: when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, from now on, at present, immediately, the moment (8)表特定的顺序关系的过渡词: first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterward(s)(后来), meanwhile(几乎同时), thereafter(在那以后), last, finally, eventually(终于) (9)表换一种方式表达的过渡词: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way (10)表进行举例说明的过渡词: for instance, for example, like, such as (11)表陈述事实的过渡词: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth (12)表强调的过渡词: certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously (13)表比较的过渡词: like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, similar to (14)表目的的过渡词: for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to (15)表总结的过渡词: in a word(总之,简言之), in general, in short(总之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary 二、文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成,在修辞中称为启、承、转、合。“启”就是开头, “承”是承接,“转”是转折,“合”是综合或总结。 (1)用于“启”的过渡词语 用于表示“启”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头: first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently, It is often said that…, As the proverb says…, It goes without saying that…, It is clear/obvious that…, Many people often ask … (2)用于“承”的过渡词语 表示“承”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中: second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt It is true that…, Everybody knows that…, It can be easily proved that…, No one can deny that… The reason why …is that …, There is no doubt that…, To take…for an example (instance) …, We know that…, What is more serious is that… (3)用于“转”的过渡词语 用于“转”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中: but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate(无论如何), nevertheless(虽然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, in spite of ..., yet, instead, I do not believe that…, Perhaps you’ll ask why… This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to…, Though we are in basic agreement with …, yet differences will be found, That’s why I feel that… (4)用于“合”的过渡词语 用于“合”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中: in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus,after all(毕竟), eventually, hence, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in sum(总之), on the whole(就整体而言), to sum up From this point of view … On account of this we can find that … The result is dependent on … Thus, this is the reason why we must… 更多文章:http://home.eduu.com/space.php?uid=186142
英语写作用词篇二:09年中考英语写作突破:词汇语法题词汇语法题 1.) 词汇题 考察学生对常用词汇的掌握程度 考点:词汇拼写;词汇的活用。 --写作的基础;最基础的语言测验 常见题型包含: a. 根据英语或中文提示补全句子。 b. 根据英语或中文提示选词补全短文。 a. 根据英语或中文提示补全句子。 例: September is the n______ month of the year after August and before October. (2007杭州市中考题) 解法: 1. 先通读题干。 2.再揣测大意。 3.结合提示作答 答案:ninth 第九 句意通畅;语法正确;复合提示 注意:词汇题常考看似容易却容易拼写错误的词 字母拼写 nineth → ninth b. 根据英语或中文提示选词补全短文。 例: know they way two lucky Reading is the bridge to language learning success, but it"s hard for us to read as much as we need. ___66___, both teachers and students are thinking more about reading now. it is well ___67___ that reading is one of the most important ___68___ of information input(输入), especially for the students who learn English as the ___69___ or a foreign language…… (2007哈尔滨市中考题) 题:用方框中所给单词的适当形式填空,使文章通顺、连贯、合理。(每词限用一次) 解法:1.先通读全文。 2.掌握大意。 3.再逐空作答 66. ______, both teachers and students are thinking more about reading now. 一个完整的简单句前,用逗号隔开的部分经常由副词作状语,表示时间、地点、程度、方式等。 lucky → luckily 67. it作形式主语的主系表结构。It is well known that … 什么是家喻户晓的;众所周知的 know → known 68. one of … 后面接名词的复数。 题目根据逻辑理解填 ways 69. or (或者) 表前后两者的并列关系。foreign language ≈ second language (two → second) 总结: 此类题型作题诀窍--先读题,要理解,选词靠逻辑,变形靠语法。 2.) 句法题 考察学生在英语写作中正确使用句子的能力。 常见题型包含: a. 句式转换题 考点:活用多种句型表达同一思想内容的能力。 例: 我每周花五小时观看电视。 ? I spent five hours watching TV every week. It takes sb. sometime to do sth. ? It takes me five hours to watch TV every week. ? I take five hours to watch TV every week. ? It takes five hours for me to watch TV every week. ? To watch TV takes me five hours every week. 不仅要知其然且知其所以然,去体会英语的复杂多变,活学活用的掌握语法。 句型转化题大多会以填空的形式出现。 例 1. Read more books, and you will get more knowledge. (改写句子,句意不变) The_______ you read, the _______ you will get. (2005年济南市课改区中考试题)考察语法点: the more… the more… 两个比较级叠加,表两者间的因果关系。 答案:more books; more knowledge 例 2. I don"t think he can finish it on time. (改为反义疑问句) I don"t think he can finish it on time. ____________________________? (2007年兰州市中考试题) 答案:can he 主句是包含宾语从句的否定句。 I作主语,think作谓语,he can finish it on time 为宾语从句部分。 我们的添加语应当用肯定句的倒装形态 can he。 "否定前置" b.) 补全对话 根据语境,用适当的语言完成对话 A: Alice! A nice day, isn"t it? B: Yes. Spring is coming. ___________________? A: Tomorrow? Tomorrow is not a good day for plating trees! B: __________________? A: I listened to the weather report. It says it"s going to be rainy and windy. B: _________________! If it rains, we have to stay at home and do some reading. …… (2005年黄冈市中考试题) 考察能力:1. 口语会话中语法的正确性; 2. 在一定语境中顺畅展开会话的能力。 作题方法: 1. 阅读整段对话; 2. 了解其大意、基本情景、对话者之间的关系; 3. 每空的填写都要察看上下文,尤其是前后两句。 1. Shall we plant trees tomorrow?/how about planting trees tomorrow? 2. Why/How do you know that? 注意标点符号,通过标点符号确定句型。 3. What a pity!
英语写作用词篇三:09年中考英语写作突破:常用句型 词汇常用句型/词汇 There is/are … It lies (in) … above Above my desk, there is a frame of picture. across from There is a big hospital across from the river. under/below Under the bridge, there is a dog barking. before in front of; in the front of in the front of the bus beyond further down around nearby next to Next to the hill, there is a little running river. close to on the left/right On the right of the tree, there is a bench. opposite to on the top of There is a box on the top of the bench beneath 记叙文 中考英语作文模板 第一部分:简单明确交代 when; who; where 第二部分:详细流畅的叙述事情"起因""经过""结果" 第三部分:事情经历留下的感受或对其的看法。(I will never forget the day in my life.) 中考英语作文范文 Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the South River the next day. On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket. My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes. As soon as we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank. Some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees. After we finished our work, were tired. But we all felt happy to see the young trees we had planted on the river bank. 时态一致; 记叙文一般用"过去时",叙述当时正在发生的用"过去进行时" 记叙文常用词汇及句型 in the morning at noon in the afternoon in the evening at night at 3 o"clock at first then; and then soon at the same time I was watching TV, in the meantime/at the same time she is washing clothes. first; second; third after before later afterwards at last finally presently 2. 信件的结构格和式 信件包含的5个部分 1.Heading 信头 发件人地址→ Class 11 junior 2 排列顺序:由小到大 Rendafuzhong Middle School Haidian District Beijing, 100081 China Sept. 19, 2006 Newsweek International 323 Madison Avenue ← 收件人地址 New York, NY 10022 U.S.A Dear Mr. Lee: ← 2.称呼语 …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………… ← 3.正文 4. 结束语 → Yours ever 5. 签 名 → Wang Wei 描写文-----形容词 记叙文-----动词 have a swim(go swimming) have dances(go dancing) have a picnic go to cinema have a party hold a sports meeting go for an outing see the sights of … play chess with sb. help sb. do sth enjoy sth I feel bored allow sb. to do sth keep sb. from do sth call on sb. to do sth offer to do sth refuse to do sth agree to do sth regret to do sth happen to do sth be woken up do sth as usual set about doing sth try one"s best to do sth take/send sb. to someplace I"m trying to find sth I can"t help doing sth Some people are doing A., others are doing B., still others are doing C.. 议论文 鲜明的论点 中考英语作文模板: 第一部分: 引论 (阐明论点) 第二部分: 本论 (阐明分论点,以论据支持) 第三部分: 结论 逻辑顺序 表结构顺序的词 First; at first; secondly; at second; thirdly; the fourth on one hand; on the other hand; next; finally; At last; as a result; consequently; for example; for incidence; in addition; in this case; in a word; in conclusion in summary because so but therefore however 表达精确;条理清晰 中考英语作文范文 The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollutions I"m worrying about. First of all, water pollution and air pollution are the most serious because people can"t live healthily with polluted water and air. In fact, more and more diseases are caused by polluted air. I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We"d better walk or ride bikes instead of taking cars because more cares mean more waste gas. In a word, we should make our world more and more beautiful. 应用文 信件 中考英语作文模板信封 邮票 发信人地址 收信人姓名 收信人地址 发件人地址→ Class 2 grade 3rd 排列顺序:由小到大 Rendafuzhong Middle School Haidian District Beijing, 100081 China Sept. 19, 2006 Newsweek International 323 Madison Avenue ← 收件人地址 New York, NY 10022 U.S.A Dear Alex: ← 称呼语 …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………… ← 正文 结束语 → Yours ever 签 名 → Wang Wei 信首: Thank you for your card. Thank you for writing to me. Your letter came into my hand yesterday/several days ago. It"s a long time since I got your last letter. I often think about you. How have you been recently? How are you recently? How is everything? How are you getting along? I miss you very much. …… 信尾 I"m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Please say hello to your family. Write back as soon as you can. Happy Teachers" Day! With my best wishes With many thanks. All the best! Good luck! May you succeed! 结束语: 平辈:Yours; yours sincerely; sincerely yours; 长辈:Yours respectfully; respectfully yours Yours faithfully; Faithfully yours Yours truly 电子邮件: From: [email protected] To: [email protected] Subject: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 日记 中考英语作文范文: May 6, Monday cloudy ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. It was a bright September afternoon. A north wind is whistling. There is a threat of rain. Fine; sunny; clear; cloudy; windy; rainy; snowy; frosty; stormy Clear later cloudy 通知 Notice Students and teachers of Grade 3: ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… The headmaster office Dec. 29, 2006 应用文高分要诀:1. 正确的格式 2. 完整包含提示信息 好词好句 Make good use of 充分利用 opportunity 机会 quality 素质 individuality 个性 teenager 青少年 trust 信任 perfect 完美的 firmly 坚定的 society 社会 tradition 传统 firecrackers 爆竹 environment 环境 on the opposite 相反 defeat 失败 arrange 安排 honor 荣誉 enjoy oneself 某人玩得开心 rush 冲,奔 surprise 惊奇 puzzle 迷惑 fever 高烧 repeat 重复 by and by 不久 effort 努力 as soon as 尽快 at home/ at a street corner在家/在街道的拐角处 on the road/ on the street/ on one"s way to / on the boat/ on the playground 在路上/在街上/在某地的路上/在穿上/ by the table/ the lake/river 在桌边/在湖边/在河边 in the park 在公园里 look after/take care of 照顾 be busy doing sth 忙于干。。。 be angry with sb. 生某人的气。。。 give sb. a call/ ring sb. up 打电话给某人 hear from 收到某人的信 mid-term exam 期中考试 final examination 期末考试 take…for granted 视…为理所应当 fall behind/catch up with 落后/跟上 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情 The happiness will come when the pain leaves. 苦尽甘来 The winter is coming and the spring is not far 冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗? As long as we work hard, we can make the impossible possible 只要我们努力,就能变不可能为可能。 Set sb. an example 给某人树立榜样 It"s easy/hard to do sth. 干。。。 。。。 Practice makes perfect!
英语写作用词篇四:英语教学中的杀手锏——听写_1000字英语教学中的杀手锏——听写 英语是一门实用性很强的学科,它主要是通过听、说、读、写、译等形式来训练的。除了以上的方式,我认为听写是必不可少的。因为听写能综合以上几种训练方式,有效地对学生的英语学习情况作出衡量。 听写,顾名思义,既听又写,它渗透在各种形式的语言活动中,是最常用到的基本功之一。听写测试要求学生把听到的内容准确无误地以笔头的形式表达出来。听写是领会语言语义的一项重要能力,听者要对听到的语音信号进行复杂的加工,整个过程是一个非常积极活跃的动态过程,也是语境,背景知识和语言知识相互撞击相互作用的过程,更是对听力材料不断进行吸收最终形成理解的过程。既训练学生听的精确度,及写的速度,又在培养他们的语感,拼写单词及遣词造句的能力。那么,怎样利用听写这一杀手锏来进行教学呢? 首先,我平时要求听写的内容是多方面的。课内外的易错易混淆重点单词、短语、句子,也包括听力中的、作文中的、阅读中的。 其次,听写的方式是多样的,如可以上课前用一点时间听写,可以在草稿纸上、黑板上、听写本上,可以学生之间相互听写用相互检查,也可以一单元多次听写,复习时几个单元一起听写。听写时,教师可以报读英语,也可以报读汉语,基础差一点的班级可以交叉报读。听写句子时第一遍听完整后,第二遍写、第三遍检查。如教师的发音不是很清晰,也可借助录音。 第三,批改落实要认真。为了引起学生更加重视,教师可以以多种方式进行评分或批改。批改后可以把听写本分三个等级,即优秀、较好及有待努力这三类。优秀的可以展示出来,进步大的同学要及时表扬,对于退步了的可以当面批改,然后叫其更正。也可以小范围再进行一次同样内容的听写。听写后学生相互检查,然后学生自查,教师再复查。 第四,在上课时,教师可以指出哪些就是听写的内容,学生会更加认真听讲,并作好笔记,这样,学生会跟着老师思考问题,有效地提高学习效率。在听写前教师要精心准备听写的内容,收集有价值的往往是命题人容易出题的内容,也就是命题胚胎。听写后教师应要求学生更正且保存好,可作为期末与高考的复习资料。 总之,听写水平的提高是一个反复实践的过程,需要经过长期的艰苦的训练才能见成效。只要我们注意平时的基础训练具有扎实的基本功,且掌握一些听写技巧,就能“听”“写”两不惧,下笔得心应手。对于高中学生来说,听写是很好地克服学生眼高手低的一个手段,也是教师教学的杀手锏。 湖北省监利县新沟中学:李明辉
英语写作用词篇五:中考英语作文范文集锦(精选10篇)英语中考作文焦点——以环保话题 今年几个世界大国首脑都参加了“八国峰会”,这次的主题是世界经济、能源问题和气候变化。经济发展离不开环境话题,能源使用必然污染环境,而气候变化就是经济发展和环境问题矛盾的产物。广西的城乡清洁工程表面就是环境整治问题。学校的两基工作从某种意义上来说其实就是学校环境改变没有。2008年北京奥运会也离不开环保这个主题。八荣八耻也有部分内容是关于环保主题的。总之,环境保护是当今世界难题。因此,中考的内容离不开以下这些范文要点,而且都是记叙文形式,有些句子相当有用,不论什么作文,都可以从下列文章选出相应句子,只需稍微改一下地名或主语,尽量减少语法错误,起码有4、5分是正确的。如:Throw the waste here and there(到处乱扔垃圾)变成Don~t throw the waste here and there.(不准乱扔垃圾)。“应该”变成“不应该”等等。我想中考作文完全可以取得高分。比如:作文题:1、职业:将来想干什?或者你的爱好是什么?(或者题目是:毕业之后)你可以写将来做一个环保注意者,如何做?做什么。2、如果题目是写我的班级、学校、家乡之类的更加可以谈到环保情况(讲现象,有好有坏,如何去改变?有什么措施?如何的美?)3、如果是写为什么北京有沙尘暴、为什么今年有些省份干旱少雨?为什么有些省份洪涝灾害严重。那就是环境破坏问题。因此关键最后几天最好能背熟这些范文。 尽量围绕环保展开主题,通过过渡句和环保扯上联系。比如:(过渡句)The most important question in the world today is pollution .(当今世界最重要的话题就是污染问题。) 范文提示 1) It’s our duty to save water(节约水是我们每个人的责任。) As we know , water is very important to man, (我们知道,水对人类来说是非常的重要。)we can’t live without water. (没有水我们就不能生存。)The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. (适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。)But some people don’t care about it .(但是有些人却不关心或不在意。)They waste a lot of water in their daily life. (日常生活中他们浪费很多水。)Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.(更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。) They throw rubbish into rivers , too. (他们还乱扔垃圾到河流理去。)Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.(很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。) Something must be done to stop the pollution. (人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。)Only in this way can we live happily.(只有这样,我们才过得幸福开心。) If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.( 如果我们不节约水,那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪) 2) Planting trees Trees are very helpful and important for us. (树对我们人类是多么的重要和有用。)We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. (为了将来我们的生活过得更好、更加健康我们应该种更多的树。)It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.(爱护和保护环境是每个人的责任和义务。) 3) 旅游介绍 预览摘要: 北京奥运会期间,有一大批外国人来北京参观。假设你是导游,请根据以下内容,向外宾简单介绍北京的情况。 要求: 1. 100 词左右; 2. 要点包括: a. 有悠久的历史b. 有许多名胜古迹 Ladies and gentlemen,(女士们、先生们) Welcome to BeiJing, now let me introduce Beijng to you.(欢迎到北京,我来介绍北京给大家。) Beijing is a city with a long history. It is in the north of China. It has a population of 13,240,000.(北京是一个历史悠久的城市,它位于中国的北部,人口13.240.000) There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Summer Palace and so on.(北京有很多名胜古迹,象颐和园等等。) The Great Wall is a beautiful place.( 长城是个漂亮的地方。).There is a saying that he who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. (有句谚语说:不到长城非好汉)The water in Miyun Reservoir is clean and not polluted. (密云水库的水很干净没有受污染。)There are all kinds of fish in it. (里边有各种各样的鱼。)You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there.(那里你可以划船、钓鱼或者野炊。) It is really a good place to spend your holiday. (那里真是个度假的好地方。)Besides, you can go and visit Beijing Museum. (此外,你还可以去游览北京博物馆。)There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.(那里你可以看到很多恐龙蛋和化石。) I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Beijing.(我希望大家在北京玩得开心快乐。) Thank you.(谢谢) 4)、近日,你班在“知荣明耻” “八荣八耻大家谈”教育活动中,召开了一次关于学生荣辱观的主题班会。存在的问题1.不尊敬老师、家长等。2.学习散漫、考试作弊等。3.乱扔垃圾、污损环境等等。 Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss what is considered to be honorable behavior and what is shameful. (最近我们班开了个班会讨论什么是光荣和耻辱。)It is really a pity to see all this in our school.(很遗憾在学校看到这些现象)Some students don’t respect their teachers or parents. (不尊敬老是和父母)Some don’t take their studies seriously and cheat in exams. (作业不认真,考试作弊)Some throw wastes everywhere and pollute the environment . (到处乱扔垃圾污染环境。)It is honorable to obey the law and rules , care much about our class and study hard.(关心班级、努力学习、遵纪守法是光荣)It is shameful to break school rules, to be selfish or to make little effort to achieve success.(违反学校纪律、自私 骄傲是可耻的)We should respect others and think more of them than of ourselves.(我们应该尊敬别人经常关心别人)We should work hard and make much more progress to repay the society.(我们应该努力学习取得更大进步从而回报社会。)We should try our best to keep the environment clean。(我们应该想方设法保持干净的环境。) 人与环境是和谐相处的,我们生存在地球上,人是自然之子,而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者,大家都知道,人类只有一个地球,地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞,如果我们把它损坏了,破坏了大自然的组织,等 于消灭人类。因此,环境要与社会公德联系起来,与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。 Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals. Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind. Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it. Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment. 保护我们的城市(Saving Our City) It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly. Or it may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute the air and water. People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water. Our city has started to face the problem. Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place .Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air. Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers. People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution. 保卫地球(Saving the Earth) As time goes by, man is making the earth sick. People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere. Factories let out their waste without doing anying to it . This has cause some serious problems. Such as the land is sandy, the river is dirty, the air is less clean, even the temperature of the earth is rising. What should we do to save the earth ? My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put rubbish into dusbins and stop factories pouring waste directly into the air or rivers. In all, we have only one earth, we should do our best to protect it, or we will regret. 如何保护环境(How to Protect the Environment) Good environment can make people feel happy and fit . To improve the environment means to improve our life. We should plant more trees and flowers around us . We shouldn’t cut them down . We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air. Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into dusbins. Never spit in public. Don’t draw on public walls. It’s our duty to protect the environment. 环保(environmental matter) The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays. Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future. Due to lacking of environmental concepts, people""""s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world. We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation. In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world! 关于环境保护(水资源节约)的话题 Our environment is very important for our lives . We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on . In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now,people cut down many trees. Air pollution and water polloution are very serious . The environment around us becomes very terrible . We should protect our environment. First, we should plant many trees to keep water. Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.. Third , we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river . Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags. Finally, we can ask more people to join us. 中考英语作文范文——中学生适当的放松方式 中学生学习时间长、压力大,专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正在就“学生适当的放松方式”这一话题进行征文。假设你是二十二中初三(3)班的班长,最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请根据表格提供的调查信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿。 对 象 二十二中初三(3)班 人 数 60人(男:31人;女:29人) 常用放松方式 1.看电视(30人) 2.玩电脑游戏(12人) 3.听音乐(8人) 4.进行体育锻炼(5人) 5.没有时间放松(5人) 你的观点 哪一种(些)放松方式是适当的? 为什么? 注意: 1.短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点; 2.词数:80-100。题目和开头已为你写好,不记入总词数。 The Proper Way(s) for students to Relax I am the monitor of Class 3,Grade3,No.22Middle School.Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. There are 60 students in my class(31 boys and 29 girls ).Different students have different ways to relax.Half of the students often watch TV.12students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are busy to relax. (As we study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure,every student should choose proper ways to relax.In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax.)I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides,It can help improve our health.(Therefore,I often Play pingpong after class.It’s really helpful to both my health and my study.) 中考英语作文范文——体育运动的好处和坏处 体育运动的好处和坏处(Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports) a. 体育运动的好处 b. 体育运动可能带来的副作用 c. 我参加体育活动的体会 Sports do us good in many respects (TS). It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, "there are two sides to everything", and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities. What""s more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health. My participation in sports tells me that sports can make us healthy both physically and psychologically. It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good. 中考英语作文范文——北京之旅(A Trip To Beijing) On July 5th my parents took me to Beijing. We stayed at Huabei Hotel. On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old. It has millions of bricks. Each brick is very big and heavy. Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall. We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall. We also went to the Palace Museum. The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum. What nice palaces these are! I visited the Palace Museum and felt excited. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum, you can go to Beijing and have a look. The following days, we went to the Summer Palace, Tian Tan, North Lake and Xiang Hill. I now know more about the history of China. I also like modern Beijing. The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. Later, I went back with my parents by train. I really enjoyed the trip to Beijing 中考英语作文范文——坚持你的梦想 坚持你的梦想(Hold to Your Dreams) 提纲: 1.坚持梦想才有可能实现它。 2.举例说明。 Everyone has his dreams, but not all these dreams can come true. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams. Marie Curie, a famous scientist, has set a good example. In 1898, Marie found a new element in the pitchblende. In order to prove her discovery, she must get it and show it to the world. Then to get the new element became her dream and goal of her life. After four years"" hard work and refinement of tons of pitchblende, Marie and her hus-band at last saw the dim blue light of the new element -- radium. Her dream had come true. There are many other examples. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are popular with the public, and even the students who enter tile university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders. Hold fast to your dreams, no matter how big or small they are. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end, you ,sill find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true. 中考英语作文范文——我爱我的家 根据中文意思和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给的英文提示词语必须都用上;中文提示内容不必逐句翻译;根据英文提示,每组所写出的句数不限。(共12分) 几年以前我家只有一间小屋。三个人住一间屋真是艰难。现在我们已经搬进了一套两室一厅 的单元房。我非常高兴。当我父母做. . . , 我能. . . 。我爱我的家。 1. a few years ago, family, have one small room 2. it, be, three people, in the same room 3. now, a new flat(单元房), one living room, two bedrooms 4. be happy, my homework, quietly, my own room, my parents A few years ago, my family had only one small room. It was very hard for three people to live in the same room. Now we have moved into a new flat with one living room and two bedrooms. I""m very happy. I can do my homework quietly in my own room when my parents do the housework or other things. I love my home. 中考英语作文范文--我的家乡 请你根据下面的提纲,以“我的家乡”为题,写一篇100—120字的短文。 提纲: (1) 家乡的地理位置; (2) 解放前的情况; (3) 解放后的变化; (4) 对家乡的感情。 My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
英语写作用词篇六:高中英语学习总结我用我的方法。从高一时90多,到高考129。大学六级524,四级552 首先先你要端正心态,不要急躁,不管别人考多少分,你做你自己的事,这样才能静下心来学习。要成为英语高手就必须比别人走更多的路,做更多的事,所以单词和语法都要拿下。 首先,对于单词,有如下几种方法,第一个,是加强记忆的频度,也就是说,早上记了几个,隔几个小时又看一次,总之一天之内,记忆的间隔不要太长,否则你辛苦积累的记忆会随着时间的延长而淡化,第二个,是可以根据自己的理解编顺口溜,比如good morning 是狗摸你…(见笑了)…,第三个,最重要的是,记单词的时候,不要忘了阅读,一边记单词,一边看文章,这样可以把孤立的单词串联起来,记忆的效果会加倍,第四个。我建议你记单词要分门别类记忆,要形成一个意群,比如,重要性用magnitude magnificence ,表示非常,大大地有exceedingly,tremendously,extremely……这样做在你写作时,是十分有好处的,写作时不要尽写一些低级词汇,你要写高级词汇,比如重要性写magnitude,许多写a multitude of 或者handsome。 其次,是语法。学习语法,首先要明白什么是主谓宾定状补,什么是系动词,什么是直接宾语,间接宾语,这些是学习语法的基础,语法是房子,主谓宾定状补等是沙石砖瓦 : 1) 状语是指描述被描述对象的状态,包括时间状语,地点状语,方式状语,伴随状语,让步状语等 2) 定语是指被描述对象(名词,代词)的特征,包括颜色,气味,重量,年龄,材料等 3) 表语一般是be 动词以及某些特殊动词(比如turn ,smell等) 后面的形容词,分词,不定式等 4) 主语指的是动作的施动者,或者是被描述的对象,包括名词,代词,非谓语动词(不定式,动名词,过去分词作主语)等 5) 谓语指的是动作本身(也就是动词本身),be 动词 6) 宾语指的是动作的承受者,或者是与主语相对比的对象,也包括名词,代词,等 7) 从句指的是复合句中的起从属作用的句子,复合句指的是一个句子中有两重或者两重以上的主谓宾(定状补)成分,这几个有独立主谓宾结构的句子通过连词连接(比如and which that where what等),比如i want to tell you that he is a cheat(我想告诉你他是个骗子),这里有两套主谓宾(定状补先不说)第一套是主语i 谓语want 宾语是tell后面的成分(you that he is a cheat);第二套:主语he 谓语is 宾语a cheat ,这两个句子通过连词that 连接,通过句子意思可以判断:“我想告诉你“是主句,”他是一个骗子“是从句 最后,我建议你,平时读报,或者做题的时候,发现有好的句子好的词汇,你要抄下来,长期下来,你的作文会有提高的,需要说明的是,这个提高过程可能很缓慢,但是最后能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别,靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇,句型,句子。我个人的理解是,在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上,作文便应该以词汇取胜,因为在这个层次上,大家的语法都差不多,没什么变化,唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧,很多想到“许多”就用many,但是你别忘了many a ;handsome;massive,innumerable;很多人想到“专家”就写expert,但很少人会想到specialist,很多人在想到“擅长”这词,就写be good at ,却不知还有更高级的表达法:be expert at 或者excel in ……高手和庸才,就体现在这些细微的差别上 !
英语写作用词篇七:老师不会教,才让学生背“好词好句”?●学生背的好词好句,有多少是用得上的? 很多老师和家长在不知如何教孩子写作文的时候,会说,背好词好句吧,能用得上,事实并非如此。 任何知识从学习到应用,都是建立在三个层次上的,第一个层次是识记,第二个是理解,第三个是应用。一个人在13岁之前,记忆力是最佳的,因此在记忆上有这种优势,但孩子在对词义词性的识别上,是十分偏弱的,在字词的理解方面同样存在这种情况,因此即便积累了大量的“好词好句”,也无法恰如其分地运用到在要写的文章中。 ●“好词好句”并非万能。 另外,很多对“好词好句”的界定,通常是优美的语句或华丽的辞藻,这种观念的本身,便存在问题。好词好句,是指那些生动形象、准确适体的语言,而通常意义上“优美的语句或华丽的辞藻”,在那篇文章中会是好词好句,但到了别的文章中,却无法起到应有的作用。 首先说“好词”,回想一下,很多所谓的“好词”,是四字词语或成语,这些词语能够简明扼要、言简意赅地表达自己的思想情感或事物的情形性质,因此,这些浓缩了的优秀语言,从这方面来讲,确实是好词。但他们并不适用在学生作文中,学生作文是练表达能力基本功和进行语言练习的地方,需要的是语言使用的训练,让学生学会如何运用描写,如何将作文内容写得具体、生动,如何熟练地进行语言搭配。 其次,很多优美或感人的句子,作为收藏或品析,是非常有益的,但要在写作文时也要有用,则显得十分困难。也无法支撑起一篇文章,反而养成了一些不好的写作习惯--围绕一段“好句”,想要填充出一篇文章来,反而使学生的写作文过程变得更加的复杂和艰难。 ●对不会教作文的老师来说,教学生背“好词好句”,抄作文,是最省事、最无效的办法 近些年以来,大学一直扩招,师范或非师范类的中文系招生,一直是只要整体成绩就了就可以。但这些学生中,会写文章,懂写作的学生极少,虽然在大学里会学到相关的专业课,但这些专业课把关并不严。使得很多到了工作岗位上的语文老师,自己也不知道如何写文章,教学生写作文更是不会。而这种现象不只是在年轻老师群中,在整个语文教师队伍中,也是非常普遍的。 最浅显的道理,教数学的老师,首先这道题,他自己是会解的,教英语的老师,英语他是熟的,唯有教作文的,大多数老师懂的是语文基础,不会讲的是写作。 对不会教作文的老师来说,教学生背“好词好句”,抄作文,是最省事的办法,对学生来讲,是最辛苦最无效的劳动。而有些老师发明出一个理论来,说抄作文是仿写的第一步,不学会抄,怎么学会仿写,不仿写,怎么能学会作文。 事实上是,问问写作水平好的人或作家,有几个是靠抄作文学会写作的?目前没有发现! ●“好词好句”扼杀学生的创造性,反而成了学生作文水平进一步提高的拦路虎 “好词好句”的作用,本适应用20%写作能力特别弱的学生用,用来进行临时性的提高。比如,有位同学写作文时,这样写了句“教室里很乱”,这样写,肯定是最不生动、具体、形象的,通常写作能力偏弱的同学,会写得如同这句话一样,很概括,不够具体生动。 当我们用好词好句时,效果会好出很多来,如“教室里一片狼藉”或“教室里鸡犬不宁”,都能突出教室里不同方面的乱来。比刚才好了很多。 但很多让学生使“好词好句”成习惯老师,便认为这已是“过得去”的作文,至少显得有亮点,而这种“亮点”,却使得学生的写作水平只能停留在中等偏下的水平。真正的好的语言,是通过描写,具体、生动、形象地再现当时的场景,如“教室里,有的桌子斜压在椅子上,好像随时都会倒下去一样,有的书本从桌肚里滑了出来,掉得地面和椅子上到处都是,我们很难找到可以落脚的地方,不得不用手扶了一下桌沿,想走过去。手刚碰到了桌子,它便”吱呀“一声,晃晃悠悠地倒在了一边,压在了散落的书本上面” 上面一段,没有用“一片狼藉”这样的词语,却比用了“好词好句”有着更好的表达效果,更容易让人感受到当时教室里的乱。 因此,学生最缺的不是“好词好句”,而是“学会描写”,以会用几个“好词好句”要求学生,必将扼杀学生的创造性,反而成了学生作文水平进一步提高的拦路虎。只能培养出会写一两篇八股文的作文,永远教不出能写好文章的学生。 ●不积累“好词好句”,学生还能做什么? 如果真要孩子背些东西,不如小学低年级时积累些诗词,中年级多掌握些成语本义,高年级时多背些经典古文。对有写作基础的小学生或中学生,可以多积累些动词,对写作水平的提高,也是很有益的。 如果要提高写作水平,除了可以参加专业的写作培训,还可以重点多进行描写训练,先学会将文章内容写具体,再学会写生动。一句话,从学会描写开始。 作者系阅读写作教育专家、中华母语教育总课题组秘书长:黄保余
英语写作用词篇八:如何运用对称词把作文写实:《暑假情》今天主要讲如何利用对称词、对称句,把作文写实。 大家一边对照原文,一边看提升后的《暑假情》。 这篇原文有1500字,这对于六年级的小朋友来说特别不容易。问题在于为主题服务得不紧,有些地方显得多余。今天就归纳一下,学习、模仿张爱玲的《天才梦》的写法,来把这篇作文写实、写好。 第一段,原文为: 暑假,是孩子们最喜爱的假期,也是学生才会享有的假期,是幼儿园小孩没有的权利。小时候上幼儿园时,别的大哥哥、大姐姐(小学生)夏天在小区里到处玩,而我却要上幼儿园,问大人后才知道他们是在放暑假,于是我心里就特想上小学,因为小学有一个月的寒假、两个月的暑假,所以我开始上小学时就特兴奋。 调整为: 当我还在上幼儿园的时候,就特别羡慕别人有一个暑假了。夏天的时候,小区里的哥哥姐姐,顶着烈日流着汗,滑轮滑、骑单车、跳皮筋、打陀螺、捉迷藏,那叫一个过瘾。甚至连他们呆坐在阴凉树下,无所事事地听着蝉叫,都是那么让人垂涎。(把羡慕哥哥姐姐有暑假的事情写实) 每当妈妈拽着我上幼儿园的时候,我总是一把鼻涕一把眼泪地纠缠着问:“妈妈,我也想上学呢!妈妈,什么时候我也能有暑假啊?”从幼儿园里回来,就跟放暑假一般,那心情总跟撒了花一样,充满了兴奋和渴望,满小区地去寻那些哥哥姐姐的影子。虽然他们不会跟我玩,但听到他们在院子里大呼小叫、吆五喝六的,我就很满足了。 夏天的中午,可以通过对称词根据实际情况,仿着张爱玲的《天才梦》来写实。整个这一大段就是羡慕别人有一个暑假,理由是看到哥哥姐姐的各种玩法,这是一个对称块。下面还有三个对称块:一个纠缠着妈妈;第二个是从幼儿园回来后的心情;第三个是去寻找哥哥姐姐。通过这三个对称块,就把作者对别人有暑假的羡慕之情写出来了。 原文中把整个事情写出来了,表达得也很清楚,可是写的还不具体、不生活化。没有生活化,就是没有个性化。要把哥哥姐姐在暑假里怎么玩写实,把在上幼儿园时看到的场景也写实,这样文章就生动了。 看下一个自然段的原文: 我喜欢暑假。现在,同学们都认为学习压力大,特想回到幼儿园,因为不用写作业,而我却依然喜欢上学。 说起暑假的日程表,我以前是这样安排的:上午,写作业、听英语磁带;中午,吃完饭休息片刻,再出门约上一些朋友在小区玩上一下午。渴了回家喝杯水,出门继续玩;晚上,看书、看电视或上网。这样一天下来,我们是开心够了。 这一段中,对于看什么书、上什么网都没写实,调整为: 现在,我们终于长成了小孩眼里的哥哥姐姐,终于有了自己的暑假。我会嘲笑那些跟着老师唱着“小白兔,白又白,爱吃萝卜爱吃菜”的小弟弟、小妹妹们。望着那些呀呀学语、蹒跚学步的小屁孩,他们是不是也会像我当初那样,也羡慕着我呢?想到这些,我就可着劲地在小区里疯颠了。同学们都认为学习压力大,特想回到幼儿园,因为不用写作业,而我却依然喜欢上学。 这里把生活化的东西写进去了。长大了,有了自己的暑假了,然后去反观自照。 我们再往下看: 暑假的日程,安排的比平时要丰富得多(这是一个帽子):从从容容地写作业、听磁带;悠悠闲闲地喝可乐、吃水果。看几本诸如《哈利·波特》、《鲁滨逊漂流记》这样的小说。玩一会电子游戏,从“疯狂的小鸟”到“大战僵尸”、或是一遍一遍地在“越狱”、“生活大爆炸”的连续剧中过足瘾。一天下来,我们似乎除了玩还是玩、玩、玩……真够开心的了。 原来小朋友就写了看书、听磁带、上网玩游戏,没写具体的内容。我们把这些具体的内容用对称句写出来,也就是写实了。写实的基础,就是把要描写的东西个性化、真实化、具体化。这个时候的写实,既要用概括的语言,又不能深入下去。这样一改,就把段落的“帽衣鞋”写实了。 再往下看原文: 出门玩时,我一般骑着自行车或滑轮滑、滑滑板出去找朋友玩。这些朋友少数是同学,多数是在一同玩耍中相识的,因为有同样的兴趣爱好玩到了一起,而且基本都不知道对方的名字,最多记得住对方的姓,记得最清楚的叫郭子仪,可能是因为同姓吧。 中午时段,出勤率最高的是轮滑鞋,最低的是自行车,因为除了轮滑其它器材都玩不出新花样。轮滑时,我们在小区马路上滑从不怕被车撞,因为别人都午休了嘛。轮滑玩的最疯的是“轮滑躲猫猫”。以前我住的小区分为四个区,一、二、三区与四区之隔一条马路,而整个小区就成了我们的“藏身之处”。 躲猫猫着实刺激,非老手必输,通常只有一个或两个人捉,而且身手不凡。躲的人也不简单,各个“身怀绝技”。玩起来就有意思了,躲的人分成几小队,每队大约四人,望风的、诱“敌”的、指挥的,各尽其责。项目已经超出轮滑的范围了:过草地,爬楼梯。过草地,我们一开始都走草地躲,因为草地种在楼房后面,捉的人看不到我们。当然,走草地危险也挺大的,因为你脚下是平常三倍不止的重量,走得慢。爬楼梯,在万不得已的情况下踩着轮滑鞋上楼躲,但脚步一定要轻,否则容易被楼下捉的人听到,也会吵着居民——运气不好会招来一阵痛骂——因为楼多,捉的人一栋一栋搜,很费劲。而望风的在楼梯间窗户边看捉的人是否上了别的楼,他们一上楼我们就可以趁机下楼了,因为我们一到地面他们就算发现也追不上来了,要知道,轮滑鞋上楼容易下楼难。但是,一旦被找上楼来,就是瓮中捉鳖了。 我们小区中心有个广场,那是最容易暴露的地方,一般滑得快的人才敢走。我经常走广场,因为我是望风的,发现捉的人后我会立即绕广场几圈甩掉“敌人”,然后向座落在广场边的居民楼滑去,因为那附近有几块草坪,草坪上种了几棵结实的树。或许你已经猜到我要干什么了,没错,我就是要进行躲猫猫中最难的项目:穿轮滑鞋上树。我需要以迅雷不及掩耳的速度上树,不然就会被发现,上树后要对隐藏在树枝中的队友报告敌人的位置。一棵树上最多能藏三个人,因为人太多容易露马脚,树也承受不了那么大的重量。上树这种手段是没几个人知道的,而知道的人呢,就悠闲地待在树上看别人被追赶(通常机会较少)。记得有一次我和郭子仪,还有一位不记得名字的朋友在树上休息,在夏蝉的催眠曲与微风的安抚下,那位朋友竟然倚着树干睡着了!还好树比较大,而且他坐的地方还算结实,不然他就有可能掉下去把屁股摔成八瓣了。而我和郭子仪谈天说地。半小时过去了,朋友终于醒了,我们三个决定前往四区,减少被捉的可能。 由于游戏范围是整个小区,所以不能出小区,也不能回家,除非他的家长叫他回家。一切顺利,我们成功地躲过守在一、二、三区后门的“敌人”到达四区。在四区藏的话我可以耍赖,就是藏在我以前学英语的那栋楼,我们对小区的了解比我们家还了解,四区和一、二、三区不同的是它的每栋楼底下都安了一扇防盗门,想要进楼先通这关,要么得有钥匙,要么得知道密码,而我就知道密码,我们一进去,别人都进不来,发现了也只能干着急。不用说,最后我们赢了。 原来写的出门玩就是骑自行车和滑轮滑,这一段应该写得更有趣。前面如果是略写,这一段就应该详写,更要写实。详写一定要写实,但写实不一定是详写。可以这样调整: 当然,暑假里出勤率最高的就是轮滑鞋了。玩伴中很少有起先就认识的,都是因为有同样的兴趣爱好,从小区的四面八方走到一起、玩到一块的。除了一位叫郭子仪的,其它我们都代之以“哎”了,这样的称呼没有不礼貌,反而更亲切、更熟络。 这样就把小插曲写进去了。除了郭子仪,其他的就代之以“哎”。“走到一起,玩到一块”——对称。这里面,我们把该略的都略掉了。 我们玩得最疯的游戏是“轮滑躲猫猫”。小区被马路一分为二,但这并不能阻挡我们把整个小区视为游戏的乐园。 躲猫猫分成两组,一组是躲的,一组是找的。这个游戏着实刺激,需要人人身怀绝技。躲的一组还要分成几个小队,有望风报信的、有诱“敌”佯攻的、有运筹指挥的,各尽其责。 把躲猫猫的背景,通过三个对称块略略地介绍了: 第一个是介绍人物,“哎”是以后借代要用的对象; 第二个是介绍了游戏的地点——在小区; 第三个是介绍了游戏的玩法。 这里通过运用对称词或对称的短语,把要表达的内容更好地写实了,这样写比之原文更能起到强调的作用。再强调一点:详写一定要写实,但写实不一定要详写。写实的方法,就是对称。 作为躲的一方,我们最常用的战术是过草地、爬楼梯。因为草地在楼房后面,捉的人看不到我们。当然,有的时候最安全的地方,也是最危险的地方。特别是穿着轮滑鞋在草地上行走,更是不易(把过草地的战术写出来了)。所谓爬楼梯,就是踩着轮滑鞋上楼躲,轮滑的作用几近丧失,难度系数与踩高翘差不多了,轮滑鞋上楼容易下楼难。最大的问题是,一旦被敌人发现了,要是堵在楼门,就关门打狗、瓮中捉鳖了。 这里把两个战术说明了,不像原文那样写得很细,详略不当。我们就用“难度和踩高跷差不多”来表达。关门打狗,瓮中捉鳖——写实了,就更有趣了。 当然,我们还有一个看家的独门绝技,那就是“狸猫上树”。原来小朋友不是这样写的。借代,借代,一定要会借。小朋友写的上树,就是要进行躲猫猫中最难的穿轮滑上树。躲猫猫就是猫上树,牵强地说也是“借音借义”。 小区中心有个广场,广场上有一块草坪,草坪上种了几棵结实的树。穿轮滑鞋,要以迅雷不及掩耳的速度窜上树。这样的战术易守难攻,易发现敌人而难以让敌人发现。(然后再写实,详写。)记得有一次我和郭子仪,还有一位叫“哎”的朋友上了树。(这里的“哎”就是借代。在第一段做了铺垫的。借代后就可以永远不还了,这样就有意思了。)在夏蝉的催眠与微风的安抚下,这位“哎”竟然倚着树干睡着了!幸好他坐的地方还算结实,不然就有可能掉下去把屁股摔成八瓣了。 借代是一个战略性的方法,很多语法书、修辞书里面,把借代放在句子里。我们的方法是要把它放在整篇文章的布局里,把它提高到一个战略的高度,处处要体现,要一路借下去。这样既起到呼应的作用,读起来也是前后贯穿的。 作文要写得清晰、写得生动、写得有趣。写得清晰,就要求结构严谨;写得生动,就要求“六根六尘”法用得好;写得有趣,就要把“借音借义”、“相片相框”等技法用好。如果能写得清晰、生动、有趣了,那肯定就是好作文。 再看结尾: 暑假多么快乐!光是一中午就够High了,以后我还会向大家介绍介绍暑假的活动的。 调整为: 暑假真是丰富而快乐的,光是一下午就够High了。 结尾的方法,就是抬头收腹。所谓的抬头,就是看一看“头”讲的是什么。这篇作文的主题是“暑假情”,开头是开门见山的,写的是“暑假”;收腹,就是把“身子”小结一下、归纳一下、整理一下。这篇作文的“身子”,写的是“丰富的、快乐的、有趣的暑假”,那么在“脚”的部分再收一收“腹”——丰富而快乐的。 “头”要抬起来,昂首挺胸,只有把“头”呼应了,把“身子”收住了,“脚”自然就站立了、站稳了。“脚”写不好,问题往往出在“头”和“身子”上。 暑假情(非常老师修改文) 当我还在上幼儿园的时候,就特别羡慕别人有一个暑假了。夏天的时候,小区里的哥哥姐姐,顶着烈日流着汗,滑轮滑、骑单车、跳皮筋、打陀螺、捉迷藏,那叫一个过瘾。甚至连他们呆坐在阴凉树上,无所事事地听着蝉叫,都是那么让人垂涎。 每当妈妈拽着我上幼儿园的时候,我总是一把鼻涕一把眼泪地纠缠着问:“妈妈,我也想上学呢!妈妈,什么时候我也能有暑假啊?”从幼儿园里回来,就跟放暑假一般,那心情总跟撒了花一样,充满了兴奋和渴望,满小区地去寻那些哥哥姐姐的影子。虽然他们不会跟我玩,但听到他们在院子里大呼小叫、吆五喝六的,我就很满足了。 现在,我们终于长成了小孩眼里的哥哥姐姐,终于有了自己的暑假。我会嘲笑那些跟着老师唱着“小白兔,白又白,爱吃萝卜爱吃菜”的小弟弟、小妹妹们。望着那些呀呀学语、蹒跚学步的小屁孩,他们是不是也会像我当初那样,也羡慕着我呢?想到这些,我就可着劲地在小区里疯颠了。同学们都认为学习压力大,特想回到幼儿园,因为不用写作业,而我却依然喜欢上学。 暑假的日程,安排的比平时要丰富得多:从从容容地写作业、听磁带;悠悠闲闲地喝可乐、吃水果。看几本诸如《哈利·波特》、《鲁滨逊漂流记》这样的小说。玩一会电子游戏,从“疯狂的小鸟”到“大战僵尸”、或是一遍一遍地在“越狱”、“生活大爆炸”的连续剧中过足隐。一天下来,我们似乎除了玩还是玩、玩、玩……真够开心的了。 当然,暑假里出勤率最高的就是轮滑鞋了。玩伴中少有人是起先就认识的,而是因为同样的兴趣爱好,从小区的四面八方走到一起、玩到一块。除了一位叫郭子仪的,其它我们都代之以“哎”了,这样的称呼没有不礼貌,反而更亲切、更熟络。 我们玩得最疯的游戏是“轮滑躲猫猫”。小区被马路一分为二,但这并不能阻挡我们把整个小区视为游戏的乐园。 躲猫猫分成两组,一组是躲的,一组是找的。这个游戏着实刺激,需要人人身怀绝技。躲的一组还要分成几个小队,有望风报信的、有诱“敌”佯攻的、有运筹指挥的,各尽其责。 做为躲的一方,我们最常用的战术是过草地、爬楼梯。因为草地在楼房后面,捉的人看不到我们。当然,有的时候最安全的地方,也是最危险的地方。特别是穿着轮滑鞋在草地上行走,更是不易。所谓爬楼梯,就是踩着轮滑鞋上楼躲,轮滑的作用几近丧失,难度系数与踩高翘差不多了,轮滑鞋上楼容易下楼难。最大的问题是,一旦被敌人发现了,如果堵在楼门,就关门打狗、瓮中捉鳖了。 当然,我们还有一个看家的独门绝技,那就是“狸猫上树”。小区中心有个广场,广场上有一块草坪,草坪上种了几棵结实的树。穿轮滑鞋,要以迅雷不及掩耳的速度窜上树。这样的战术易守难攻,易发现敌人而难以让敌人发现。记得有一次我和郭子仪,还有一位叫“哎”的朋友上了树,在夏蝉的催眠与微风的安抚下,这位“哎”竟然倚着树干睡着了!幸好他坐的地方还算结实,不然就有可能掉下去把屁股摔成八瓣了。
英语写作用词篇九:优质课观摩体会县小学英语优质课评比在于10.25—10.27在进修附小举行,三天的观摩活动让我领略了众多优秀教师的风采,也使我对小学英语的读写课有了更深一步的认识。 其中几位选手的课给我留下了很深的印象:7号选手的教学思路非常清晰,她有效地利用了旧知识去构建新知识,例如单词walkman通过ant—lion—kangaroo—mouse—apple—noodles的首字母组建,然后又自然而然地引出了walkman的首字母w。这一设计十分巧妙,即复习了前面学习的单词及字母有呈现的新的知识,boy和girl的呈现也使用了同样的方法,这样就使得教学的各个环节环环相扣,逻辑性很强。而且这堂课中学生的听、说、读、写四项基本能力均得到了充分的训练,教学目标的达成度很好。 3号选手虽然在时间的安排上出现了失误,使得许多环节没能得到展示,但是她简捷明快的入课方式、多种方式的新知呈现以及到位的语音教学,让人体会到一种扎实沉稳的教学风格。13号选手的单词归类复习很有特色,包括主题句型的操练、阅读障碍的排除为学生的阅读铺平了道路。10号选手的拓展活动,把整个单元关于friend的话题系统地整合到一起,这对学生知识的运用能力是一个很大的提升。还有5号、9号、11号选手富有感染力的教学激情,让人体会到青春的朝气和活力。 总体感觉四年级的读写课是各具特色,而五年级的课却受策略影响太深,对于文本的处理思路是大同小异,不同的各选手对于读前活动的安排和对于“写”的要求及练习的程度。 赛后闫老师的总结解决了我们长期以来读写课教学的困惑,那就是在字母单词课上我们首先要明确字母和例词的关系,让例词不仅仅要起到巩固记忆字母的作用,还要起到渗透字母在单词中的发音的作用,也就是在这一课型中我们要合理地渗透语音的教学,这应该也是字母单词读写课上比较重要的一个环节。而在句型读写课上我们要处理好听说和读写的时间分配问题,尤其是听和写的时间安排,忽视了任何一个层次的时间安排都会影响到听、说、读、写四项基本能力目标的达成度。 每一次学习和观摩,总会获得很多优秀的思想和方法,同时也总会发觉到自身的更多不足,正如《礼记 *学记》中讲到的“学然后知不足,教然后知困。知不足,然后能自反也;知困,然后能自强也。 ”学习能帮找到自省,学习能帮我们自强,我们应该抓住每次学习的机会,通过不断的自省,逐步地自信、自强起来。
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